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Ok, Elizabeth, this piece flows naturally from my idea to the next and includes well incorpGated evidence and elaborations. Your word choice and use of transitional phrases, along with your ability to smoothly introduce your evidence is in fact evidence that you're on your way to being one exceptional writer with a solid and powerful voice. Well done.
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Comments: Ok, Elizabeth, this piece flows naturally from my idea to the next and includes well incorpGated evidence and elaborations. Your word choice and use of transitional phrases, along with your ability to smoothly introduce your evidence is in fact evidence that you're on your way to being one exceptional writer with a solid and powerful voice. Well done. Robbin Howard, Mar at